inspired by a poem of Jack's that was up a while back, fall out girl, I think was the name and an episode of Coupling - the genious show that it is. well enjoy, CL.
btw the reason I haven't been around is that i'm in portugal at the beach. cheers y'all.
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fallout boy
red alert! red alert!
champagne~tango
bubblingbluebright
redlipstick collarcoat
sillybillyblunders
just my fallout boy
johndumbjohnjack
i ain't no tumblinjill
johnsillswillmill
tongue twister in a jean jacket
whipping wordless and wildly
judy'sa james dean
red alert! red alert
you just
my
fallout
boy
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Great job! It flows well and reminds me of a children's chant.
I reckon I can read this poem in about three seconds. It's that quick.
Pretty cool. I just like how it runs.